Monday, February 21, 2011

Together Make It More: Charlotte, age 12

Charlotte from Lombard, Illinois sent in this song. I love how she uses specific images in the chorus to illustrate her theme of togetherness. She shows us vividly that by working together, we can accomplish so much more than we could on our own. You can't have a chord without individual notes, you can't have "we" without "you and I." Just look at the beautiful way she describes that: "And just like a note/Finds its soul in a chord/We take what we have/And together make it more." Congratulations, Charlotte...you wrote a hit song!

Post a comment for Charlotte and let her know how much you like her song.



Together Make it More
By Charlotte, age 12

When we stand by ourselves
And go it alone
We can accomplish alot
But it’s sometimes a lonely road
There are things in this life
That just seem much better
When you take simple things
and combine them together

Chorus:
What is the sun
If we don’t have a sky?
There can’t be a we
If we don’t have a you and I
And just like a note
Finds its soul in a chord
We take what we have
And together make it more

A friend to lend a hand
Thanks for a job well done
For these things to occur
You must have more than one
A friend to watch your back
teachers grow your mind
Alone these things can’t be
They just exist when combined.

Chorus:
What is the sun
If we don’t have a sky
There can’t be a we
If we don’t have a you and I
And just like a note
Finds its soul in a chord
we take what we have
And together make it more

Bridge:
T. E. A. M. that Spells Team
Because together everyone achieves more; and that means
When you work together, it turns out better
Then everything’s O.K
And there is no I in team

Chorus:
What is the sun
If we don’t have a sky
There can’t be a we
If we don’t have a you and I
And just like a note
Finds its soul in a chord
we take what we have
And together make it more

7 comments:

Northwoods Catie said...

Fabulous song with a wonderful message. Thank you, Charlotte, for making my day! Catie Vodicka

Victor said...

Awesome, catchy tune there Charlotte. Keep up the hard work !!!

Michelle H. said...

Nicely done, Charlotte! I am proud of you.

Nikki said...

Great song! Can't wait to hear it on the radio!

margaret j said...

Charlotte, You are definitely a songwriter!

Please keep sharing,
Peggy

k r c said...

Great work on a clever, catchy song! Keep it up!

Tea (age 10 1/2 from Wisconsin) said...

This is now one of my favorite songs!!!!