I received this song from Lorenzo in Westerville, Ohio. I especially like the line "Time to say goodbye to the before girl." It's a perfect, simple, catchy way to describe letting go of the past. Congratulations, Lorenzo...you wrote a hit song!
Post a comment for Lorenzo and let him know how much you like his song.
Someone Else
by Lorenzo, age 8
Someone else
My love you see, How can this be?
This girl who is she is a mystery.
I found a girl who understands me.
Time to say goodbye to the before girl.
Someone else out there,
Someone else out there.
Time to say goodbye to the before girl.
I know she said it.
She didn't care about me.
Someone else out there.
I know someone cares about me.
I know someone understands.
Don't cry. I'm here to comfort you.
Trying to make you the best you can be.
Don't you see?
Someone else out there.
I know someone's out there caring about me.
Someone else out there for me.
Someone. Someone. Someone else.
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Someone Else: Lorenzo age 8
Labels:
age 8,
i wrote a hit song,
lorenzo,
ohio,
someone else,
songwriting for kids
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
4 comments:
Hi Lorenzo, I really like that line "there is someone out there caring for me"...it is faith filled to know that. Thank you for the song!
great song, lorenzo!!! it leaves me wanting to hear more about this mystery girl!!!!
This song rocks!!
Congratulations, Lorenzo! Catchy lyrics. Keep writing!
Post a Comment