Great Songs by Creative Kids
Chloe from Renoldsburg, Ohio sent in this song (our second winner from Ohio...you guys are creative in that state!) Songwriters often use a traditional or common turn of phrase to make a song sound catchy and familiar...Chloe does this very nicely with the phrase "once upon a time." I also like her line "too real to be true." Congratulations, Chloe...you wrote a hit song!
Post a comment for Chloe and let her know how much you like her song.
Once Upon a Time
by Chloe, age 10
Once upon a time I forget my line and
Wished it never happened
Every dream, every once upon a time
You'll only find it way up high in the sky
Ohhh
Chorus
Once upon a time a dream will come true
Once upon a time a story will be told
Once upon a time true love comes
Too real to be true, yeah!
Once upon a time a dream will come true
Once upon a time a story will be told
Once upon a time true love comes
Too real to be true, yeah!
Don't think it will happen to you for real
Oh all you gotta do is hope, yeah
Just hope for the best, yeah
Chorus
Once upon a time a dream will come true
Once upon a time a story will be told
Once upon a time true love comes
Too real to be true, yeah!
Just dream once upon a time
And calm yourself down
Do it once upon a time
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14 comments:
Chloe,
I was really touched by your song. I think you are a born songwriter. I am going to look for new songs that you write, because you have wisdom way beyond your 10 years!
You are very courageous for your age. Please keep writing songs...
Great song, Chloe. Congratulations!
cool song, chloe! keep writing!
This is such an uplifting song, and the lyrics of that chorus are very catchy. Great job, Chloe!
Hey Chloe! Are you the Chloe that commented on my song, Don't Need? Anyway, what an amazing song, your born a songwriter! Well done, and keep writing!
I did comment your song Katie! I loved it and thanks for all ya comments!
All you guys who commented my song thank you!
HEYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
Its Cassie i love your song so so so so so so MUCH! you are so cool!
Thanks alot Cassie! See you next year!
Thanks guys for commenting my song!
I sure will keep writing!
i liked your song i also like your title once upon a time i am almost nine years old.
Thanks alot lucy! You could be what ever you want to be follow your dreams. I am now 11 years old!
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